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1. In the art studio near the Boulevard Montparnasse. (Where...?)
2. With Susie Boyd. (Who...?)
3. She had heard a great deal about the young man. (Why...?)
4. In a school for young ladies (Where...?)
5. She had a great affection for Margaret. (What...?)

1. The bookeeper had prepared a trial balance by the end of the quarter.
2. All assistant general managers are at the conference now.
3. According to the contract, the goods are to arrive at the port at the end of the week.
4. Closer links are being established between these two companies.
5. Payment for the goods is to be made by a letter of credit.
6. There are several ways that a remmitance from an overseas buyer can be transmitted to an exporter.

life and in general it is interesting(исправьте ошибки а то я не уверен что правильно написал)

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pluses in that you can study English on the Internet when you want. You can choose time. On the Internet there can be more detailed material. also you shouldn't leave the house. one more plus that you won't spend money. Now each person can allow himself it.
Minuses of studying of English on the Internet, it is laziness. It is sometimes very difficult to sit down most at the Internet and to start studying English. You can use helps. if you have no progress, you can give up English studying on the Internet.
Presently English needs to be known all. Many professions demand knowledge of English. Studying of English is a hard work. Many efforts are necessary that, to study it. English language is an international language. His knowledge can help you with rest abroad. I think that English studying on the Internet, more popular way. After studying, you will be able to watch movies in English, to listen to music. the most important you will be able to communicate with foreigners, to study their culture. I very much like English, I completely would like to seize it. 15:09:39

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...man had ... row with his wife. This made him leave ... home later than usual so he drove to work very fast. While he was going round ... corner, ... dog ran across ... road. ... man stamped on ... brakes,... car skidded (... road was in ... very bad condition),... man lost control of his car and crashed into ... lorry which was parked on ... double yellow line.