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I remember my first
teacher very well. Her name was elena a.She and we met on the first
day of school on a warm autumn day. She has an incredibly warm personality. She
was middle-aged of medium. She is well build, wrinkled pale-skinned with rosy cheeks.She
usually wears brown curly hair in heatly bun which highlights her round
face.her smile whole face lights up. She wears light makeup and casual
clothes.

She was a kind
woman and paid much attention to us all. She taught us to read and write, told
us many interesting things about everything and she instructed us how to work.
She is very good professional. She loves children, and it is very important in
a teacher's work. will always remember e.a. I have only warm memories of those
years











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30 окт. 2013 г., 9:39:05 (10 лет назад)

I remember my first
teacher very well. Her name was elena a. She and we (мы имеется в виду ученики? предлагаю убрать She and оставить просто We met..) met on the first day of school year on a warm autumn day. She was an incredibly warm personality. She was middle-aged of medium (что значит средних лет середины? можно убрать of medium). She was well-build, and had wrinkled pale-skin with rosy cheeks.She usually wore brown curly hair in heatly bun (что значит здоровая булочка? She usually made a bagel with her brown curly hair, that accented her round face) which highlights her round
face.her smile whole face lights up. She wore light makeup and casual
clothes.  (нужно определиться, в каком времени вы пишите, где-то настоящее, где-то прошлое, я все заменила на прошедшее время)

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