Проверьте ,пожалуйста,правильно ли я перевела текст из первого лица в

Alike has wanted a bicycle since her last birthday

My ideal school, this is where you go to his home. At the entrance there are lockers. They are all your school supplies. In another section, you can hang your clothes and shoes. Removable footwear is not needed, because the carpets throughout the school. It is not difficult to clean them, for this there are special machines. Dining room as a coffee shop, but only healthy food. Are you people, and you say to them that you would like to order. For example, the menu might be fruit and vegetable salads. For tea, a cake. On the lessons we would only talk. On each desk for computer 2. In the Assembly Hall is very soft and big chairs that can accommodate 2 people. Each row of seats, starting with the first, raised to 40 cm.
Перевод:
Моя идеальная
школа, это когда ты заходишь как к себе домой.

При входе
стоят шкафчики. В них лежат все твои школьные принадлежности. В другое
отделение можно повесит свою одежду и обувь. Сменная обувь не нужна, так как по
всей школе лежат ковры. Очищать их не сложно, для этого есть специальные
машины.

Столовая
как кафе, но пища только здоровая. К тебе подходят люди, и ты говоришь им, что
ты хотел бы заказать. Например, в меню могли быть фруктовые и овощные салаты. К
чаю, какое-нибудь пирожное.

На уроках мы
проводили бы только беседы. На каждой парте по 2 компьютера.

I did not go this summer on the sea. But I spent many of times with my grandmother. I helped her in the kitchen garden and in the house. I often walked with my young brother. I engaged the chemistry, read the book, watched TV in the free time. At first was rainy weather, then it was sunny. However I liked this summer.

Проверьте пожалуйста,правильно ли я вставила (правильный порядок слов) выделенное словосочетание?

1. I wouldn't like that wickedly boy TO come to our party
2. The policman made the thief ... return the thing he had stolen

3. He was made TO earn his living at the age of fourteen
4. Most of the teenagers are not allowed TO act as they like
5. MY MOTHER WOULD LIKE ME to COME HOME BEFORE NINE O'CLOCK
6. When I get good marks at school, it makes me ... feel happy
7. Tom was made TO stay in the palace and TO do all th things princes usually do
8. Nobody expected the trip TO be so wonderful
9. Let Mary ... put on her smart clothers and ... go to the theatre with us
10. we would like the trade between our countries TO develop