Помогите пожалуйста выявить проблему для эссе: some people believe that young people learn a lot by doing a part-time job. Other people say that young

Я искал свою тетрадь полчаса, прежде чем нашел ее под газетой.

1. When you (come, will be coming) home I (will be doing, do) my homework.
2. She (cleans, will be cleaning) the room when you (return, will be returning) home. 3. When father (finishes, will be finishing) his work mother (reads, will be reading) the cook book. 4. When my sister (calls, will be calling) me tomorrow I (have, will be having) the test.

IV. Употребите Present, Past или Future Progressive.
1. They (discuss) the question when you come. 2. Look at him, he (call) to his grandfather. 3. When I entered the room he (talk) in sleep. 4. That’s right. You (read) my thoughts. 5. They (quarrel) when I came in. 6. We (play) chess in half an hour.

Написать эссе по английскому языку(пожалуйста,потрудитесь сами, а не копируйте с других сайтов,написать 90 слов не так уж и трудно(P.S мне трудно)) в следующем формате:

общий объем около 100 слов,можно больше,но не меньше 85;
обязательно использование фраз,так называемых linking words
1 абзац-вступление
2 абзац-изложить собственное мнение
3 абзац-противоположное мнение
4 абзац-опровержение мнения оппонентов
5 абзац-заключение
тема для эссе:
Some people are sure that sending to prison is the only way to punish criminals. However, a lot of people believe there are far more effective punishments for criminals than prison.

помогите с эссе пожалуйста!)

others don't agree with this idea.

Это тема:
Some people think that professional sport is too traumatic to be healthy, too demanding to be combined with good education and getting adequate social experience for children and teenagers to practice.