Вопрос только тем, кто очень хорошо знает англ! Остальные, пожалуйста, не отвечайте! От этого эссе зависит моя оценка за полугодие!
5-9 класс
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Проверьте пожалуйста, правильно ли написано сочинение? Я имею ввиду время, смысл там. Буду очень благодарна если поможете!) В этом сочинении мне нужно рассказать о памятных днях моей семьи!)
"I want to tell you about memorable days in my family.
The first memorably day is wedding anniversary of my parents. They married a
long time. On this day our family dines in the restaurant. Then we walk around
the town, and our parents talk to us different interesting stories about them.
I with my sisters give a present. Usually, we give a family’s photos, cakes, bouquets,
books. They always rejoice, when we congratulate them.
The second memorably day of my family is New Year. Sometimes, our family
invites quests. We celebrate this holiday together. At first, we prepare the
New Year dishes, watching a film “Ironiya sudby”. At 10 p.m. we sit at the
table and speak about next year. Then we spend interesting contests. At 23.55
we prepare to make a wish. At the midnight we make a wish and rejoice the New
Year.
I like to spend holidays with my family together!"
I want(здесь я бы написала I would like to tell ...) to tell you about memorable days in my family. The first memorably(memorablE здесь же прилагательное ) day is wedding anniversary of my parents.(я бы написала my parents' wedding anniversary) They married a
long time. (they have married for a long time) On this day our family dines in the restaurant.(без on просто this day) Then we walk around
the town, and our parents talk to(tell us,ни в коем случае ни talk to us) us different interesting stories about them.(themselves)
I with my sisters give a present.(my sister and I usually give them pretty presents, such as family photos, cakes, bouquets or
books) They always rejoice, when we congratulate them on their holiday.
The second memorablE day in our family is The New Year. Sometimes, our family
invites quests. We celebrate this holiday together. At first, we prepare the
New Year dishes, then watch a film “Ironiya sudby”. At 10 p.m. we gather togerher at the
table and discuss our last progress and future plans. Then I organize interesting contests. . At the midnight we make a wish and rejoice the New
Year.
написанно без ошибок .....но мне не нравится смысл...очень много местоимения We-мы
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1)Pam cooks dinner.
2)My mother cleaned the windows yesterday.
3)We have already done our homework.
4)My father will book the tickets.
5)They printed the first book in Germany.
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When Edison was a boy of fifteen,he worked as a telegraph operator.He had to be on duty froom 7 p.m to 7 a.m and give a signal every hour to prove that he did not sleep.The signals were made with astonishing exactness. One night an inspector arrived and saw Edison sleeping in a chair. He was about to shake him when he caught sight of a mechanism on a table near clock pointed to the hour the instrument got busy and one lever threw open the key while the other sent the signal ever the wire.The inspecter seized the sleeping boy,roused him and fired him.That is why the first of Edison's numerous invention was never patented ...этот текст мне нужно написать по русскому как он читается.Например(Hello-хэллоу)вот так весь текст мне надо помогите пожалусто а то тему здать надо.А в англ яз я не сильна:((((
smaller, and some species it is generally true rarity. Tigers on our planet, only about 6, 5000, and after a couple of decades ago, these predators were several times more. Why did they disappear, because they are in some way unique animals . In proof of this can result in some interesting facts.
1.Tigry not listed as endangered they still continue to kill, as in India for the killing of a tigerget a lot of money, about 7-8 thousand dollars.
2. Tiger see six times better than a man, all because of a special unit pupils predators.
3. Tiger live - 20 years. and females live on less than males.
4.Tiger has more than 100 pages on the skin, and no two tigers have the same stripes.
5. Tiger may not have about one week.
6. Tiger excellent swimmers, swim because they are not always necessary. Swimming givesthese animals is fun.
7. Tiger born blind and helpless, their birth weight between 0.8 - 1 kg. K 11 months, they may already own to hunt and gather their own food
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-Сегодня очень холодно,не так ли?
Да,сегодня очень холод.
-Как ты думаешь,правда ли что завтра будет тепло?
-Все зависит от погоды,я же прав?
-Да ты прав.
-Неужели в Сант-Петербурне -40?
-Ты серьезно?Неужели там и в правду -40?
-Да,неужели ты мне не веришь?
-Верю.
-Получаеться,в нас скоро тоже будет сильно холодно,не так ли?Я ведь прав?
-Безусловно,