Задание во вкладыше!

Английский знаю неплохо,но с составлением предложений у меня явные проблемы.
Пользовалась транслейтером.Просьба-пофиксить все мои логические и прочие ошибки.
Премного благодарна.
I love cinema. And I would like to connect with it the future life. But not as the performer - the actor, the director, the screenwriter or someone else, and in the consumer, the listener. In other words, film critic. It seems to me very interesting, to absorb ранбше all a film product and to extend the opinion on it, influencing thereby a choice of the cinema-goer. I am bewitched by film festivals -Sundance, Berlin, Cannes... And certainly, I dream to render sometime on similar action. But how to receive this specialty? To arrive on the film expert.I dream of the VGIK, but there only 12 budgetary places that does my dream unrealizable. It is worth looking for higher education institutions more simply. If at me it doesn't turn out with cinema - I will go to any ordinary educational institution, to management or something something like that.If absolutely it isn't set, I will go to work, and in a year again I will pass the Unified State Examination. The benefit to me was executed recently 17 and I won't feel the old woman, going to the university in 18.This history very isn't legible and to tell the truth, anything so doesn't frighten me, how own future. It is difficult to present that through any half a year life will cardinally change. That I will cease to go to school, I should become independent, to leave a comfort zone. As though I didn't calm myself that time still is, the foggy future every day everything becomes closer. Very terribly at so early stage of life to make a mistake and it to spoil the life.

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