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Mike was working as assistant during summer vacation, and found pretty girl named Jennifer at the store. He was shy but he finally asked her out. He was so happy and excited about it. On the dating day, he was kind of late because of the traffic jam. He backed to his home and changed his clothes. When he was trying to take a bus, he noticed that he has left his money at home! He backed to his home again, but his parent was out and his house key was in the house! He climbed the tree and got his money and run to the bus station. Suddenly police car stopped at him and tried to take him to the police station. He explained that he lived that house again and again. He was so late and Jennifer wasn’t there. She was so angry. He called her over and over, and wrote a letter that said “Can we begin again? Please?” She wasn’t angry any more. They have dinner together. This book was cute. I like love story! It’s really fun to read.
Hanter1973
18 марта 2015 г., 14:57:38 (9 лет назад)
Kuzminaksenia
18 марта 2015 г., 16:50:21 (9 лет назад)
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Mike worked as (shop?) assistant during his summer vacation, and he
found a pretty girl named Jennifer on the store. He was shy at first but he
finally asked her out. He was very happy and excited about it. On the day of
their date, he was a bit late because of traffic jams. He had come home and
changed his clothes. When he was trying to take a bus, he noticed that he had
left his money at home! He went back home again, but his parents were out and
his house key was inside the house! He climbed the tree and got his money and then
ran to the bus station. Suddenly, a police car stopped near him and the
policemen tried to take him to the police station. He explained that he lived in
that house again and again. He was very late and Jennifer wasn’t there. She was
very angry. He phoned her over and over again, and then he wrote a letter that
said “Can we start anew? Please!” But she wasn’t angry any more. They had
dinner together. This book is very cute. I like love stories! They are really
fun to read.
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