Ребят,задали сочинение,я написал,нужно проверить грамматику,суть в том,что эту работу надо сдать на отлично,без ошибок. I would like to

had a bed, but Tom, his grandmother and his two sister Bet and Nan slept on the floor and coverd themselves with rags.Bet and Nan were fifteen years old. They were twins. They were always dirty and in rags, but they were kind-hearted girls. The mother was like them. But the father and the grandmother were very bad people. They often got drunk and then they fought each other and beat the children

facilitate life Нужно проверить грамматику и орфографию ,ну и можете добавить что нибудь своего

никого не встретишь, а если одет плохо и не хочешь ни с кем встречаться, то увидишь всех своих знакомых. Но мне нужно на английском без ошибок. Можете перевести уже то что я написала и придумать еще 2

Нужно написать письмо
You are going on a hiking tour in the Carpathians. You need to buy some equipment advertised in the Internet shop.
Write a letter of at least 100 words asking for infomiation.
Use the plan below
Para 1: greeting; the purpose of your witing (and mention where you saw the ad).
Main body
Para 2: give information about equipment you need; how many items you would like to buy.
Para 3: ask the most important details you are interested in.
Conclusion
Para 4: ask what kind of payment is avaiiable; closing remarks; your signature.

wear as what our health at risk. Still would like that would be in our school cafeteria food here was the same as in the American school canteens. I hope that in our school heating included in stronger.
And of course I would like to go and see " the Winter Olympic games2014 inSochi.

I would like to ask you for our school e-books for every student. Because all the books are very heavy. So backpacks nosit.Iz difficult due to which our health threat. Still like that would be in our school canteen fed as well as in American school cafeterias. I wish that our school heating included in stronger.

And of course I would like to go and see "The Winter Olympic Games 2014" inSochi.

проверьте пожалуйста отрывок из сочинения . Это типо письмо деду морозу =DDD
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