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I go to school five days a week. Our classes start at 8 o'clock a. m. and last till 3 o'clock p.m. So we have 6 or 7 lessons a day. We study many different subjects: Ukrainian, Russian, English, literatures, history, biology, physics, chemistry and mathematics etc. Languages and history are my favourite subjects.
Because of the exams in this year I don’t go to the section and clubs. All my leisure time I am preparing for exams or rest.
At school I like to communicate with friends and learn new and interesting things during the lessons. But sometimes teachers ask too much homework and I don’t like it.
I admire my class teacher Lyudmila Ivanovna and history teacher Galina Alekseevna, they are really good teachers
The best moment in my school life this last year, when the session was canceled. All my classmates and I were very happy.

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1) in Canada
2) in New Zealand
3) in Denmark

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было. Заранее всем большое спасибо)P.s от 80 до 100 слов) 28 баллов

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