Проверьте пожалуйста, нет ли ошибок? "My summer job" This summer I want to experience some fun and try to earn money.

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Ann( to have) her music lesson now. She ( to have) her music lessons twice a week. She (to have) fifty lessons since last year. Ann ( to have) this one for twenty minutes already.
I'm going to have a walk. I (to do) all my home exercises already. I always (to do)them in the afternoon.

education.All I wanted was to go out into the world feel independent and start working. One of the valuable lessons I learned at school was how to write a CV.i dug up some examples from my old text books and compiled my CV. I must have given out about 20 copies to local supermarkets caffee shops offices restaurants bars building companies garden centres and clothing shops. After two weeks of waiting I got a positive reply and so my first job was filling documents as an office junior.i had to sort all of their files and keep them in alphabetical order.Ok so I learnt the alphabet and lost of new names but after two weeks I was starting to get headaches.And I was not getting any job satisfaction. Then my dad offered me a job to help him out at his bakery.He was getting very busy and needed some extra help.When I started out I was the night baker.I had to get there by 4 a.m.I learnt quickly about the different types of bread and cakes.I got used community meeting new people making friends and feeling useful.Now that job satisfaction! I am now the manager of our shop so my dad is able to rest a bit .I feel proud to be continuing in the family business.Just think that this bakery was started by my great- grandfather and its been selling bread in our town for over 100years! As you an see it took me a while to find and understand what I really wanted for a career.For some people choosing a career is the easiest choice they ever make. My sister knew that she wanted to be a dancer at the age of six.

New Bug has a lot of attraction. Most Famous landmark is the House of culture. It is situated on the center. He has monument Shevchenko Taras, newspaper (Vpered), library, gymnasium and pizza, many shops.
I love this city.
If you take a wolk around my town you can see Sophia waterfall. You can see waterfall on the river Ingul. Many people come to here. You can relax, swim and fishen.
The nature is wonderful here.

the working conditions(be) good. c) if( work) long hours, I ( get) tired by the end of the week. d) if I (have) to deal with difficult clients, I ( need) good interpersonal skills. e) if I (want) to be a lawyer, I ( have) to get some qualifications first. f) I ( get) a lot of work experience if I ( try) some odd jobs in summer. g) I ( be) well- paid if my job (be) really dangerous. h) I ( be) happy if my future career ( involve) creative work. Вот ниже представлены Решения , но только как эти решения объяснить по временам, как бы это сказать например 1 это Past simple и тд, прошу пожалуйста буду очень благодарен. 1)IF I had more free time I took up a new hobby. 2)I will be happy with my future job if the working conditions will be good. 3)If i worked long hours, I got tired by the end of the week 4)if I had to deal with difficult clients, I need good interpersonal skills 5) If i want to be a lawyer I have been get some qualifications first 6) I gets a lot of work experience if I tryed some idd jobs in summer 7) 8) I will be happy if my future job involves creative work

I did not go this summer on the sea. But I spent many of times with my grandmother. I helped her in the kitchen garden and in the house. I often walked with my young brother. I engaged the chemistry, read the book, watched TV in the free time. At first was rainy weather, then it was sunny. However I liked this summer.