Проверьте, правильно ли?

TO SEE YOU WHEN YOU ARE ILL?

IS YOUR DOCTOR A KIND WOMEN-MAN?

DO YOU ALWAYS DO WHAT YOUR DOCTOR SAYS?

WHAT DO YOU DO WHEN YOU ARE ILL?

получиться менее официальным.Помогите пожалуйста,очень нужно,как можно лучше сделайте;)

Письмо другу про сегодняшний день!
Dear Daniella,
Today was such a nice day! We had six lessons and all of them were so exciting.The first lesson today was Ukrainian language.On this lesson we wrote and did exercises.Then we had history.We learn new theme about Egypt.Then we had Maths and and German.They were quite interesting but most of all I liked the lesson of World literature.
During lesson we looked magnificent movie “A Captain at Fifteen”.This film is about a boy who was taken on board of the ship.The captain and most of the crew were killed while hunting for a whale.So the boy became a captain.
Unfortunately we short of time and we didn`t watch movie up to the end. I hope that we woods see the end of this film next lesson.
Discribe me, the most your remakble doing on this week!
Yours,
Liza

This
summer was perfect. Every day I walked with my friends. Also I visited my
grandmother, I helped her with the garden. I read books. I swam in the river when weather was good.

oldest cities in Russia. Him three hundred and fifty years. Irkutsk
is located on the banks of the Angara River, in sixty three kilometers from lake Baikal
and a lot of tourists visit it every years. In the
old part of the city there lots of
interesting ancient buildings.
You can visit art museum, the house-museum
Volkonskogo, icebreaker museum Angara.
You can also visit musical
a theater, theatre drama, opera and puppet theater. Tourists can see the Catholic Cathedral
or Spasskaya church they very beautiful. There are
some fantastic restaurants in the Irkutsk. You can have lunch at one of
the many cafes in the centre of the
city. Baikal is one of the oldest lakes in the world. The depth of the like is one thousand six
hundred thirty-seven metres. The water is fresh clean and clear. In the lake there are many fish: omul, harius, sturgeon, cig and
seals. Tourists usually go to like Baikal. They can buy souvenirs and eat fish there. In Irkutsk
there are more six hundred
thousand people and third of people of different nationalities^ Russian, Buryats, Tatars
Poles, Germans, and another. All the
people are friendly, live and work
together. Пожалуйста проверьте мое сочинение. Правильно ли все. Если нет исправьте ошибки. Заранее вам благодарна.