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есть еще собрание видео про Лондон по темам.Там постоянно тетка рассказывает про них.

1.Listen!I (to hear) someone at the door.
2.There (to be) many people here tomorow.
3.I never (to see) this face.
4.John (to sail) in his boat when the storm (to come).
5.We (to have) a very good library at our school.
6.I (to forget) the name of it already.
7.What we (to have) for dinner now?
8.It"s been a long time since i (to see) him.
9.He ( to need ) it right now.
10.She (to give) the money to me yesterday.
11.I (to see) that movie twice already.
ПОМОГИТЕ ПОЖАЛУЙСТА!!!!

тексте. Я написала сочинение, но я плохо знаю английский, поэтому в моём
тексте могут быть ошибки, помогите пожалуйста проверить это!!! Заранее
спасибо!!
текст:
My best and memorable day in my life is
considered the new year! On the eve of my always covers the strange
feeling that something needs to happen and joyful magical. Throughout
the festive atmosphere , all selected beautiful Christmas tree, buy
different fruits , sweets, prepare gifts for loved ones.

We begin
preparing for the holiday in advance. Clean the house , decorate the
Christmas tree ,Decorate the room with balls, garlands, beautiful toys.
Mom always cooks for the holiday table something unusual and very tasty.
I try not to sleep time of arrival of the new year under the chiming
clock . After the final blow on the street fireworks begins, which can
last for an hour! We usually have fun, hold various contests , dance,
sing . It's really fun!

Especially good when New Year's Eve worth
frosty snowy weather. In windows of all the houses flashing colored
lights . Celebrating and having fun .Apparently, due to the fact that
the New Year a general holiday , celebrate it so fun!

here yesterday? – No, I am at home. 5. Jim don’t rides the bicycle on Sundays. 6. Where will they going next week? 7. My mum just made tea. 8. Let’s gone to the kitchen. 9. Look! Our old cat catches the ball. 10. I doesn’t like think about it. 11. Where you keep these cakes? 12. They want to go to the cinema last Saturday. 13. Don’t drunk this bad water. 14. Mary always have bath in the morning. 15. The children swim in the lake now. 16. She have read this text, doesn’t she? 17. Where I see you tomorrow? – We are at school. 18. Do you buy a new car before Christmas? 19. Pete and Ted wears raincoats in autumn. 20. Little Lily doesn’t found her doll yet. 21. Wait! We run to you. 22. He not understood the film last time. 23. We always liked eat tasty things at home. 24. Why do you breaking this box?