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oldest cities in Russia. Him three hundred and fifty years. Irkutsk
is located on the banks of the Angara River, in sixty three kilometers from lake Baikal
and a lot of tourists visit it every years. In the
old part of the city there lots of
interesting ancient buildings.
You can visit art museum, the house-museum
Volkonskogo, icebreaker museum Angara.
You can also visit musical
a theater, theatre drama, opera and puppet theater. Tourists can see the Catholic Cathedral
or Spasskaya church they very beautiful. There are
some fantastic restaurants in the Irkutsk. You can have lunch at one of
the many cafes in the centre of the
city. Baikal is one of the oldest lakes in the world. The depth of the like is one thousand six
hundred thirty-seven metres. The water is fresh clean and clear. In the lake there are many fish: omul, harius, sturgeon, cig and
seals. Tourists usually go to like Baikal. They can buy souvenirs and eat fish there. In Irkutsk
there are more six hundred
thousand people and third of people of different nationalities^ Russian, Buryats, Tatars
Poles, Germans, and another. All the
people are friendly, live and work
together. Пожалуйста проверьте мое сочинение. Правильно ли все. Если нет исправьте ошибки. Заранее вам благодарна.