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fiction is becoming less and less for teenagers.
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tired. We had been travelling for a week.

3. The weather was awful. It was pouring with rain. It was cold.

4. We left home early. We arrived late.

5. I was late for school. The traffic was really bad.

6. I never get a taxi. It’s too expensive.

7. The weather was bad. We still went out for a walk.

8. They have a car. They rarely use it

Вот 41е упражнение, но оно мне не нужно:

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41 Put the words and phrases into three categories in the table. Use your Workbook.

besides, although, in addition (to), because, also, however, despite, as well as, since, as, but, and, what is more, in spite of, due tor too, whereas, on the other hand

Addition | Contrast | Cause / Reason

Где живут твои родители?
Он спросил, где живут мои родители.
Я не помню, где живут твои родители
Когда ты был в Париже?
Я был в Лондоне два месяца назад.
Он спросил меня, когда я был в Америке.
Ты студент?
Он спросил меня, студент ли я?
Я построил дом.
Я покупаю машину.(запланированное действие)
Я постою дом (не запланированное действие)

.......(The Stogovs\Stogovs\The Stogov's) are going (to leave\ leave\left) Moscow .... (on\ in) Friday.

name is Olga.

In this life everyone is needed to have a friend. This necessity is born when we become aware of some parts of the world's life. When we are small and nobody want to play with us, we feel a loneliness, so we start crying or tugging at somebody. These is a first of the necessities of people’s life.
Secondly, after we have a new contact of someone, we feel an appetency and want become the best friend of this person. Since this moment, we think about the true friendship. In our head the brains start to do an analysis about the qualities of the best friendship. The honesty, sincerity, self-devotion, generousity are our wishes, that we want to give-and-take.
Thirdly, the true friendship makes us more careful and cautious towards others. The care, attention and love of close people are giving for us more happiness and the communication becomes more mutual and closely between people
In addition, we shall be interesting for all. The good sense of humour not only make a laugh us , but it is a way of deciding our problems from difficult situations. The faith in acquaintance is important in friendship, because without this we can lose the most valuable thing for us.
Don't lose something which you have!

думаю, кто он,откуда ,и почему я выбрала именно его,чего он добился..и т.д.Но типа не его биографию)