Проверьте пожалуйста правильно ли я составила предложения на английском (ошибки в предложении, может где-то не поставила артикль), очень надо

предложение. прошу, если что-то не так, исправьте. заранее благодарна.

This school year we have visited many interesting places.
we have gone on a Excursion of the museum this month.
It been interesting because in the museum have been a lot of beautiful pictures that liked us.
Also museum guide have told very interesting history about these pictures.
we have been happy with what have gone on this excursion and have learnt a lot.
best of all ....

вставить в 1-но придуманное предложение а остальные разбросать такжае только по другим.Помогите пожалуйста,очень надо к завтрошнему дню!

Письмо другу про сегодняшний день!
Dear Daniella,
Today was such a nice day! We had six lessons and all of them were so exciting.The first lesson today was Ukrainian language.On this lesson we wrote and did exercises.Then we had history.We learn new theme about Egypt.Then we had Maths and and German.They were quite interesting but most of all I liked the lesson of World literature.
During lesson we looked magnificent movie “A Captain at Fifteen”.This film is about a boy who was taken on board of the ship.The captain and most of the crew were killed while hunting for a whale.So the boy became a captain.
Unfortunately we short of time and we didn`t watch movie up to the end. I hope that we woods see the end of this film next lesson.
Discribe me, the most your remakble doing on this week!
Yours,
Liza