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I love my school. I do not know how looks like my ideal school.
My school is the best. The school has small flaws.
We have a lot of people, but not enough room for them
. And I do not like it. We also have a long change. In our school very tasty food. Our teachers are very good people. They require attention to his subject. I like number of lessons and homework.
I can say that I'm in an ideal school.
I love my school. Honestly, I do not know how my ideal school looks like .
My real school is the best. The school has few flaws.
There are have a lot of people, but not enough classrooms for them
. And I do not like it. We also have a long change. In our school food is very tasty . Our teachers are quite good people. They require attention to their subjects. I like number of lessons and homeworks.
I can say that I'm in an ideal school.
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I love my school. I do not know how looks like my ideal school.
My school is the best. The school has small flaws.
We have a lot of people, but not enough places. And I do not like it. We also have a long change. In our school very tasty food. Our teachers are very good people. They are demanding to his subject.. I like surprising number of lessons and homework.
I can say that I'm in an ideal school.
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