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kinds of violence were more problems for adults than for young people. But now, as official reporta admit, violence, AIDS, drugs and alcohol are more and more associated with youngerst. For many children from poor families violence, drinking problems and all that is associated with poverty becomes more real than reality. The Government surveys show that every fifth teenager who was arrested for criminal actions, was younger that 14 and couldn't be sent to prison. Almost half of teenagers have an experience with drugs, alcohol and sex under age of 16. A lot of teenagers who have drug or alcohol addiction almost never believe that they are dependent. These things are often combined with family and school problems. What has gone wrong? Some specialists explane that the changes of our society, the system of our life force young people to choose their own lifestyle. On the one hand, our society agrees that 15-17-yearold people are old enough to be responsible for what they do and give them quite a lot of freedom and rights. On the other hand, most adults think that teenagers aretoo young to be taken seriously. This misunderstaning produced many problems. Actually, a lot of teenagers say that their parents let them do anything they want and are quite indifferent to their problems. Many teenagers get upset or depressed when they can't dissolve their problems. As a result, it makes them believe that there is only one way out - to stop living and commit suicide. No doubt, the teens' problems will increase. And young people should fell that they are cared for.

I am an active person and because at that i very like sport and music.
i can say that i am crazy about it. I prefer playing basketball, so I spend a lot of time on it. Music is my favorite thing too. I find it relaxing and it's terrible if i can not join my lessons.

y wouldn't miss it. I think it's very interesting. I like to travel very much, but I have never been to another country yet, so I would really want to get acquaintances abroad, to learn their traditions, their values, their customs and characters. Also, having gone to study abroad, I would meet a lot of new people and find new friends. I would like to compare their education with ours. At least I would see the nature of those lands. I've always been very interested in learning ways of living in other countries, so I would gladly go for an exchange study.

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тема эссе: some people say that men withstand age better then women and remain attractive longer.

собственно моё эссе: How attractive a person is goes beyond physical qualities. A lot of factors contribute to how attractive someone is: health, wealth, food, willpower, society, personality and so on. Some people assert, that men withstand age better and remain attractive longer. But is it right statement?

On the one hand women age faster, becouse today they spend more time at work, so they don't have enough time for themselves. Moreover, women more emotional, than man. It certainly makes them unattractive. Therefore,a lot of makeup have bad effect on appearance.

On the other hand, among men there are a lot of smokers and drinkers. As far as I know, bad habits affect on the health and appearance. Futhermore, women, when they are under stress, they ask for help friends or someone from family. This is better way of coping with stress. However, man keep everything in themselves. As a result, appears old, unhealthy appearance. Moreover, there genes played important role.

In my opinion, I agree with this statment. Really, women more emotional and sensetive, then man. Usually man have more willpower and stamina in our crazy world. It help them withstand age better and remain attracrive longer. So, talking all these factors into account, my conclusion is that women get old really quickly, than man. But women live longer.