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our worls there are a lot of means of transport.One of them is by car.
In this essay I will name some of the advantages and disadvantages of travel by car.
The most common argument for is speed,which depend on type of car.I think that is very big advanture.When you travel by car you can look through the window.It's very pleasant prosecc if you like it.
In favour of disadvantages I can say that some ptople may have a sick.Travel by car is not really my kind of thing,because I have a sick,but it depend on beauty in the car.It sounds stupid but it is true.I can't put up with(терпеть) father's car,when we travel somewhere.I feel headache and sickness.But for my relatives all is good in father's car.
Evidently(очевидно) that this mean of transport not for all people,but if you like travel by car you have a good impressions from your trip.
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In our world there are a lot of means of transport.One of them is a car.
In this essay I will tell you about the advantages and disadvantages of traveling by car.
The most common argument for this such of travelling is speed, which depends on the type of your (или a car) car. I think that it is a very big advantage. When you travel by car you can look through the window. It's a very pleasant process if you like it.
In favour of disadvantages I can say that some people may have a car-sick. Travelling by car is not really my kind of thing,because I have a car-sick, but it depends on comfort of the car. It sounds stupid but it is true. I can't put up with(терпеть) father's car, when we travel somewhere. I feel headache and sickness. But in the car of my relatives I feel much better than in my father's car.
Evidently (очевидно) that this mean of transport is not for all people, but if you like to travel by car you'll have a good impressions from your trip.
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a) brochure
b) guide
c)cheque
2) Tourists who go abroad must buy traveller's ____which are exchangeable for the money of the particular country
a) cash
b) cheques
с) cards
3) For many countries you need to have a ____before you're allowed in
a)guide
b) travel brochure
с) visa
4) A ____ is someone who attends people on board the plane
a)fellow passenger
b) porter
c)stewardess
5)There was a fight on the train, but we were able to climb abroad one of the _______
a) carriages
b) compartments
c) berths
6) At the railway station we were thirsty and hungry , so we tried to find a ____
a) dining room
b) waiting room
c)refreshment room
7) Short visit often no longer than a day returning to the place you started from is :
a)a cruise
b) an excursion
c)an exhibition
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тема эссе: some people say that men withstand age better then women and remain attractive longer.
собственно моё эссе: How attractive a person is goes beyond physical qualities. A lot of factors contribute to how attractive someone is: health, wealth, food, willpower, society, personality and so on. Some people assert, that men withstand age better and remain attractive longer. But is it right statement?
On the one hand women age faster, becouse today they spend more time at work, so they don't have enough time for themselves. Moreover, women more emotional, than man. It certainly makes them unattractive. Therefore,a lot of makeup have bad effect on appearance.
On the other hand, among men there are a lot of smokers and drinkers. As far as I know, bad habits affect on the health and appearance. Futhermore, women, when they are under stress, they ask for help friends or someone from family. This is better way of coping with stress. However, man keep everything in themselves. As a result, appears old, unhealthy appearance. Moreover, there genes played important role.
In my opinion, I agree with this statment. Really, women more emotional and sensetive, then man. Usually man have more willpower and stamina in our crazy world. It help them withstand age better and remain attracrive longer. So, talking all these factors into account, my conclusion is that women get old really quickly, than man. But women live longer.
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Ps У кого учебник Биболетовой, это в РТзадание №6 на стр.17
Pps- только, пожалуйста, не из решебника.