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What Is Science and What Is Technology?
What is Science? What is Technology? These are not easy questions. People don't often see the difference between them. But they are different though the two are connected. Science studies the physical world. Trying to answer questions about this world of ours scientists ask "what" and "why" questions. "What" questions are usually answered in a rather simple way. For example we have a question: "What kind of animals live in that pond?" The answer to the question is: "Frogs, fish and reptiles." "Why" questions are much more difficult, they ask for explanation.
Technology is the use of science for practical purposes especially in industry. Technology is also methods and machines that are used in doing things in a science or profession. Technology often asks "how" questions and answers them. Some technologies cannot function without science, but there are many modern technologies that developed from old technologies without any help of science. It often happened in history that people made things and after that science tried to explain them. For example, first guns appeared and then ballistics as a science did.
During certain periods in history innovations in technology have grown so fast that they resulted in industrial revolutions.

Мой любимый город это Вятские Поляны. Как он прекрасен.

В любую пору этот город открывает объятия и впускает в свои тайны по зеленым аллеям, что ведут в скрытые от глаз старинные замки по давно забытым тропам. Но больше всего поражают своим великолепие удивительные и роскошные парковые сады моего величественного города. Их неповторимость и уникальное расположение. Берега Вятки очень красивы в любое время года и сейчас.

Вятские Поляны старинный город , ему уже 400 лет. С каждым годом город растет.Много новых многоэтажных домов и красивых мест можно увидеть: площадь Труда, фонтаны, стадион, парк Победы.

В Вятские Поляны я приезжаю на каникулах к бабушке и дедушке, тёте и дяде и друзьям. В этом городе у меня много родственников. Хоть в этом городе я и не рождалась , но я там жила какое-то время , когда была ещё совсем маленькой.

Я очень люблю этот город. И хотела бы, чтобы он процветал и становился все краше.

My favourite city it is Viatka Glades. As he is wonderful.

In any pore this city opens cuddles and admits in the secrets on green avenues, that is conducted in the ancient locks hidden from eyes on the paths forgotten a long ago. But most strike by it splendour surprizing and luxurious park gardens of my majestic city. Their uniqueness and unique location. The banks of Viatka are very beautiful at any time year and now.

Viatka Glades ancient city, to him already there are 400. With every year a city grows.Much new multistoried building and beautiful places it is possible to see: area of Labour, fountains, stadium, park Victories.

In Viatka Glades I arrive out of term to the grandmother and grand-dad, aunt and uncle and friends. In this city I have many relatives. Though in this city I and did not give, birth but I there lived some time, when was yet quite little.

I very love this city. And would like, that he prospered and became all more beautiful.