Пожалуйста, будьте добры, проверьте, правильно ли я составил сочинение по английскому языку.How I spent my summer holidays

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Rena223

13 февр. 2015 г., 11:34:25 (9 лет назад)

 My favourite season is summer. I love it very much. However, I spent it badly. This summer was not memorable. All summer I stayed at home. Half of free time  I spent in the
village. But I didn’t like to be there . There was no creature comforts. In the city I watched TV, read books. Sometimes, I played computer games
and went for a walk. In the street I played football. Sometimes, my friends and I went to
the cinema. In the summer I read books which the teacher asked to read for
the summer. I read almost everything. Some of the books were very large, but
some of them I liked. At the end of the summer, I really wanted to
go somewhere, but it didn't happen. Hopefully next summer I will spend 
better.

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Милая25

13 февр. 2015 г., 14:13:05 (9 лет назад)

My favorite season is summer. Each year I wait for next summer. But unfortunately this summer wasn't as good as I expected. All days long I stayed at home. I was in the village a couple of times but I didn't enjoy it.There was no creature comforts. In the city I watched TV and  read books. Time by time, I played computer games and went out for a walk.In the street I played football.  my friends and I went tothe cinema a couple of times. In the summer I read books which the teacher asked us to read duringthe summer. I read almost everything. A lot of books were very large, but anyway  I loved some of them . At the end of the summer, I really wanted togo somewhere, but it didn't happen. Hopefully next summer will bebetter.