Проверьте пожалуйста сочинение. Как грамматику и потсроение предложений, так и оформление. Moscow Russia 06\05\13
10-11 класс
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Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I'm really sorry for not writing so long, I had problem at school. But now everything is OK.
In your letter you writing about young people, who want to not relying on their parents. So, many of my friends and Russia`s teens want to start new life after they finish school. In the other word, they dream about buying their own flats, but I haven't this kind of dream, I want to live together with my family while I get married. And in fact, it's very expensive to rent a house in my country.
I hear about your trip in Scotland, it's so interesting! Did you see a Lohness lake? That towns did you visit in Scotland? And who did travel with you?
Keep in touch.
Best wishes,
Julia
Moscow
Russia
06\05\13
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I'm really sorry for not writing so long, I had problem at school. But now everything is OK.
In your letter you write about young people, who don't want to rely on their parents. So, many of my friends and Russian teens want to start new life after finishing of their schools. In the other words, they dream about buying their own flats, cars, beautiful clothes, but I don't haven such kind of dream, I want to live together with my family while I get married. And in fact, it's very expensive to rent a house in my country.
I hear about your trip in Scotland, it's so interesting! Did you see Lohness lake? That towns did you visit in Scotland? And who did you travel with?
Keep in touch.
Best wishes,
Julia
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tired. We had been travelling for a week.
3. The weather was awful. It was pouring with rain. It was cold.
4. We left home early. We arrived late.
5. I was late for school. The traffic was really bad.
6. I never get a taxi. It’s too expensive.
7. The weather was bad. We still went out for a walk.
8. They have a car. They rarely use it
Вот 41е упражнение, но оно мне не нужно:
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41 Put the words and phrases into three categories in the table. Use your Workbook.
besides, although, in addition (to), because, also, however, despite, as well as, since, as, but, and, what is more, in spite of, due tor too, whereas, on the other hand
Addition | Contrast | Cause / Reason
Где живут твои родители?
Он спросил, где живут мои родители.
Я не помню, где живут твои родители
Когда ты был в Париже?
Я был в Лондоне два месяца назад.
Он спросил меня, когда я был в Америке.
Ты студент?
Он спросил меня, студент ли я?
Я построил дом.
Я покупаю машину.(запланированное действие)
Я постою дом (не запланированное действие)
.......(The Stogovs\Stogovs\The Stogov's) are going (to leave\ leave\left) Moscow .... (on\ in) Friday.
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Sport is one of the essential parts of a person's life. It helps us to not only gain
good health but gives our lives interest, enthusiasm and excitement.
Nevertheless, there are people who think that sport is harmful.
In my opinion, sport is good for the body because it makes you burn calories and
makes you increase your muscle mass to have a good body. Besides it helps to
person to make more organized and better disciplined, if he plays in a team
sport. Finally, it has psychological benefits by reducing stress.
However, there are some drawbacks of doing sports. Heavy workouts can be dangerous and
even lead to serious diseases, because it takes a lot of energy and could be
exhausting. Although it is very beneficial to do exercise regularly, abuse has
its downside because as a result you may get injuries or cardiovascular
diseases.
What is more, easy workouts bring a lot of benefits to health and they are very useful.
Besides, if you do sport with your friends it gives you more fun and pleasure.
To sum up, sport is a must if you want to keep yourself healthy. But it has to be said
that some physical activities may be even dangerous. That's why sports must be
done with carefulness and without too many efforts, which lead to diseases.
name is Olga.
In this life everyone is needed to have a friend. This necessity is born when we become aware of some parts of the world's life. When we are small and nobody want to play with us, we feel a loneliness, so we start crying or tugging at somebody. These is a first of the necessities of people’s life.
Secondly, after we have a new contact of someone, we feel an appetency and want become the best friend of this person. Since this moment, we think about the true friendship. In our head the brains start to do an analysis about the qualities of the best friendship. The honesty, sincerity, self-devotion, generousity are our wishes, that we want to give-and-take.
Thirdly, the true friendship makes us more careful and cautious towards others. The care, attention and love of close people are giving for us more happiness and the communication becomes more mutual and closely between people
In addition, we shall be interesting for all. The good sense of humour not only make a laugh us , but it is a way of deciding our problems from difficult situations. The faith in acquaintance is important in friendship, because without this we can lose the most valuable thing for us.
Don't lose something which you have!
думаю, кто он,откуда ,и почему я выбрала именно его,чего он добился..и т.д.Но типа не его биографию)