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went to wake him.

3)she (talk) with Mr.Smith when I saw her in the South.

4)the accident happened while they (travel) in the South.

5)when I got up this morning ,the sun (shine) brightly.

6)at seven o'clock,when you telephoned ,I (read) the newspaper.

7)mary (play)the piano when I arrived.

8)helen fell just as she (get)off the bus.

9)the wind (blow) hard when I came to work this morning.

1. Is Mark Rob’s uncle? — _
2. Is Rob Mark and Rosy’s brother?
3. Are Edina and Arthur Rob’s relatives? —

4. Is Rosy Rob’s sister? —_
5. Is Betsey Rob and Rosy’s aunt?
6. Are the children of Rob’s aunts his cousins?

7. Is James Betsey’s uncle? — _
8. Are Rob and Rosy Edina's grandchildren?

1.she was singing happy when the teacher came into the classroom
2.the goose were swimming beautifully
3.neither Jane nor Ann are going to come today
4.mr. Black worked hard in the garden, he sold fruit and vegetables. he had enough money to live comfortable.
5.neither Tom nor his brother didn't go to school yesterday
6.he hasn't met neither Nell nor her mother
7.it was rain at seven o'clock yesterday
8.it was rain yesterday
9.i think it will be snow timorrow

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In modern society, most teens consider themselves independent while living with their parents. The issue of freedom of teenagers relevant because they want to grow up quickly and become self-reliant and free. Personally , I believe that we have a lot of freedom . First, most teenagers early start working , which makes them nezavisymimy and therefore free. Second, many of us do not listen to the advice of parents, relatives, teachers. This makes irresponsible teenagers , but free of any obligations. There are other opinions . Many parents believe that teens do not get too much freedom and they are trying to protect their children from the outside world , evil people . Unfortunately this can lead to the fact that in the future will not be adapted teenager to life. Still, my opinion is correct. I stand by my argument because the future depends on the youth , and we must be fully prepared and adapted to life , to the problems disrespect to envy. In conclusion I want to say that parents should pay attention to their children, to give advice and help to adjust to real life.