Проверьте, пожалуйста, сочинение на тему" About myself". My name is Nadya. I am 17 years old. I was born in Moscow and I live here for all my

I go to school five days a week. Our classes start at 8 o'clock a. m. and last till 3 o'clock p.m. So we have 6 or 7 lessons a day. We study many different subjects: Ukrainian, Russian, English, literatures, history, biology, physics, chemistry and mathematics etc. Languages and history are my favourite subjects.
Because of the exams in this year I don’t go to the section and clubs. All my leisure time I am preparing for exams or rest.
At school I like to communicate with friends and learn new and interesting things during the lessons. But sometimes teachers ask too much homework and I don’t like it.
I admire my class teacher Lyudmila Ivanovna and history teacher Galina Alekseevna, they are really good teachers
The best moment in my school life this last year, when the session was canceled. All my classmates and I were very happy.

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ABOUT MYSELF
My name is Marina Suvorova. I am 15. I was born on the 5 of March, 1985 in Rostov-on-Don. Now I live in Rostov with my parents and my grandmother.
My family is not very large. We have five people in our family. Му father's name is Igor Petrovich Не is forty уеаrs old. Не is а doctor and he works at а hospital. Му mother's name is Lyudmila Leonidovna.She is thirty nine уеаrs old.
She is а housewife. My younger sister is а pupil. She is in the seventh form. My grandmother lives with us.She doesn't work. She is а pensioner. I love my family. We are all friends and we love each other.
I have one aunt and two uncles. Their children are my cousins. We live in a big flat in а new house. There are four rooms in our flat: а living room, а study, а kitchen, а bathroom and two bedrooms. We have all modern conveniences: gas, hot water, running water, electricity and telephone.
I have my duties about the house. I must go shopping. I help my Mother to clean the rooms. It' s not difficult for me. I like our home to be clean and tidy.
I am а student of the college now. We have many good teachers at our college. I try to be а good pupil and I do well in а11 subjects. But my favourite subject is English.
I spend much time on it. 1 like reading. I like detective stories but I prefer to read historical novels or modern writers. I have many friends. Many of them are my classmates. We spend much time together, go for а walk, talk about lessons, music and discuss our problems.

I like to listen to modern music, but sometimes I like to listen to some classical music. My favourite compos­er is Tchaikovsky. I haven't much time to watch TV but sometimes I spend an hour or two watching an inter­esting film or a news programme. In the evening I of­ten read newspapers or an interesting book. I like fresh air and exercises, but I have not much time to go in for sports.

your e-pal.I am seven years old and I from England. My parents are doctors. I 1)___ two brother . They are students at the university of London.Have2)__ got any brother or sisters?In my free time, I go to the cinema with my brother or hang out with my friends. My best briend 3)___ Selema. 4)___ mother is from India and her father is from Germany.please write soon and tell 5)__ all about your family and friends.

Best wishes,

Emely

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