Проверьте мое сочинение и(если он есть) отметье ошибки My city is Yaroslavl.In Yaroslavl in winter weather is very cold,about of minus

«глаз», в его городских парках живет Питер Пэн, а группу улиц почему-то называют «цирком». Назовите этот город. 3. Какая ракета в 1814 году двигалась со скоростью 10 км в час ? 4. Что такое вопросы "ножа и вилки"?

Benedict Cumberbatch is one of the most popular British actors today.

Benedict was born July 19, in London, the son of actors Timothy Carlton and Wanda Ventham. He was in Harrow School in northwest London, where he began performing as an actor. He then attended the University of Manchester, where he studied drama. After graduating of University of Manchester , Cumberbatch continued his training as an actor at the London Academy of Music and Dramatic Art. Already in 2001, Benedict became famous actor in England. he began to offer the role of not only in theatre, but also in film.

Benedict Cumberbatch has played in many movies, but the international fame he received for his role as "Sherlock Holmes" in TV series BBC «Sherlock."

For the role of Sherlock, Benedict has received many awards, such as the "Golden Globe", "BFTA", "Emmy" and others.

You have received a letter from your English-speaking pen friend Ben.

I've found that almost everyone in my class is preparing for entrance exams to a university. And what are you going to do after graduating from school? Have you made up your mind about your future career yet? Are you going to follow in your parents' footsteps? What influences your choice most of all?... Write him a letter and answer his questions.
Write 80 - 100 words. Remember the rules of letter writing

решение

Each person has a very hard and difficult path. And everyone is trying to overcome this way because in the future awaits him great happiness.
After high school, I'm going to go to college and then to university. I'm preparing for exams. Just try to make good grades in the certificate, and even I began to think about their future profession. I want to become an accountant. And this choice affects my goal to achieve something in life. Parents approve of my choice

Dear Robert,
Thank you for your letter, we arrived home without accidents. On the way we stopped twice to take pictures for memory. I really liked your city. It is very quiet sometimes it seemed to me that there are no other people. Most of all I remember how we went with your father on a hunting trip. Thank you for all that you and your family did for us. I really hope that you come to us for the new year, I have already started to plan a route where we should go.
Best wishes
Igor.